Dilapidated

Eerie squeaky door
Dripping pipe drips on the floor
Mournful wind cries more



By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 7:40 PM
Fine images and nicely composed haiku, Robb
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September 9, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Like this scene in your lines Robb... its eerie and spooky ... luv your title too.. nicely created and penned with luv..
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