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DIG Dig with spade and a soulful heart, Destiny’s soil chambered beneath. Dust chalice canvas, questing art — Dovelike Wings of lily bequeath. Dig deep into the chasm of love — Desired silty handfuls, free of Debris, a blessed ruddy start.* 6/5/2018 Joseph May’s Pleiades Contest *blessed with 2 syllables

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Date: 6/25/2018 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well-written Pleiades!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2018 3:41:00 PM
Thanks, Susan!
Date: 6/23/2018 12:36:00 AM
Enjoyable ' dig' ... Congratulations, Kim ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2018 8:47:00 AM
Thanks, Probir!
Date: 6/22/2018 4:30:00 PM
I love this, and that last part was so cool how you expressed it: silty handfuls... a blessed ruddy start. Wow!! (congrats too)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2018 5:52:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 6/22/2018 4:10:00 PM
Digging deep into the heart..Congrats on your win Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2018 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 6/7/2018 5:35:00 AM
Profound and beautiful! Food for thought dearest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2018 12:01:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Date: 6/5/2018 4:13:00 PM
Amazing poem Kim! Good luck in the contest :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2018 4:55:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 6/5/2018 4:10:00 PM
Superb use of metaphor, Jan! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thanks, Janice!

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