Diet Pill Did Not Work

ate pan of brownies
after diet pill
failed me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Doll Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Caren, you just made me laugh. This is so funny and true. // Warren
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 7:58 AM
I love it! Certainly speaks of the human experience!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:11 AM
So my experience.
Messina Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 6:10 AM
Those brownies will do it every time...a delicious write, Caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Charles. I am practicing senryus.
Man Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Hahahaha!!!
Gauthier Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:28 PM
LOL - call me next time you make brownies, Caren.
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