Die Alone

Fela hela bale! Confuse the confused, Mask the unmasked, You to obtain the desired, Then theirs cares will be attended, Because we live disintegrated, And everyone will die alone.

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/19/2012 3:33:00 AM

How true! Definitely poignant! Reminds us to avoid too much external influence because it is we who steer our lives. Nice!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/19/2012 6:16:00 AM

A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jacob. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2012 5:43:00 AM

Good morning, Jacob...how are you this beautiful Sunday, on Fathers Day.. I hope you are enjoying life, as I am your poetrt....your poem is rather to deep..when it comes to the words alone & death..however you pinned such a thought...happy fathers day around you...pd

Sila Muthoka
Date: 6/17/2012 2:39:00 PM

thanks. are you sure it's too deep?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2012 5:12:00 AM

True but sad Jacob - well done. - oxox Anne-Lise