Did You Observe It

One day I said to love
Will you be rain
She is speechless !

Next day I expressed to love 
Will you be sunshine
She is soundless !

Day after day , I have been requesting her
Will you be sky
Will you be bird
Will you be my pleasure
She is silent !

one day love says to me
You will be soil
And I shall be flower

Thenceforth when the flower kisses to the soil
Memorial of  love is created at that place

Did you observe it !

SANDIP GOSWAMI, INDIA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Goswami Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:57 AM
All-time Best OBSERVE Poem by Poetry soup Administrators. I am grateful.
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 12:14 AM
I enjoyed this even more on second reading. Time for me to go to bed now! Glad to see you here tonight.
Kiser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Congratulations and it did deserve, "All time best". Yes, I observed it.
Lee Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:25 AM
Absolutely, Wonderful write, Sandip! Well observed and deserved Win! Congratulations!
Mehta Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Sandip
Hamilton Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 4:55 AM
Sandip congrats on win hugs
A   Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 2:09 AM
SANDIP, Congratulations, on your winning poem... Thank you for the lovely garden, every poem, was wonderful, and amazing. Take a trip, and enjoy my latest blog "Midnight Garden." If you'd like... Always ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 8:24 AM
ahhh, this is so sweet. And I see it won in a contest. BElated congrats to you.
A  Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 2:43 PM
Sandip, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT
Walker  Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 12:23 PM
Nicely written Sandip and congratulations on a fine win in my contest... Verlena
Mehta Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in my contest and thanks for the participation, sandip
Chircop Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 1:35 PM
I'm observing it,and its beautiful!Welcome to poetrysoup-Charma
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