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Did You Observe It

One day I said to love Will you be rain She is speechless ! Next day I expressed to love Will you be sunshine She is soundless ! Day after day , I have been requesting her Will you be sky Will you be bird Will you be my pleasure She is silent ! one day love says to me You will be soil And I shall be flower Thenceforth when the flower kisses to the soil Memorial of love is created at that place Did you observe it ! SANDIP GOSWAMI, INDIA

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Sandip Goswami

Date: 12/6/2014 10:57:00 AM

All-time Best OBSERVE Poem by Poetry soup Administrators. I am grateful.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2014 12:14:00 AM

I enjoyed this even more on second reading. Time for me to go to bed now! Glad to see you here tonight.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/29/2014 3:28:00 PM

Congratulations and it did deserve, "All time best". Yes, I observed it.

Lisa Lee

Date: 5/15/2014 9:25:00 AM

Absolutely, Wonderful write, Sandip! Well observed and deserved Win! Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/15/2014 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Sandip

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/15/2014 4:55:00 AM

Sandip congrats on win hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2014 2:09:00 AM

SANDIP, Congratulations, on your winning poem... Thank you for the lovely garden, every poem, was wonderful, and amazing. Take a trip, and enjoy my latest blog "Midnight Garden." If you'd like... Always ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2014 8:24:00 AM

ahhh, this is so sweet. And I see it won in a contest. BElated congrats to you.