Did You Notice

On either side the boarded footpath lie
Still pools in swamp with sinister reflection
Dull images and scenes of life gone by 
Suggest to heart a darkness and dejection

But did you notice, let the view beguile
Where sun now lights the pines in vivid green
And winter-stripped to elegant profile
The leafless trees’ bare symmetry is seen

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The beech hedge brown and desiccated stands
Each leaf crisp dry from which all life has fled
In faded form the present aspect scanned
What chance that it may yet renew and spread

But did you notice, hid in twigs concealed
There, tiny buds await a sign to grow
Then full imbued with reborn life they’ll yield
A Spring apparel, bounteous life bestow

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The nation now divided in contention *
Each faction faces others they despise 
With hatred they wish for their sole ascension
To bring on their adversary’s demise 

But did you notice that we still have choice
Where freedom reigns, select our destination
In Liberty we yet may raise a voice
And speak unchained in self determination

* Choose your own ‘nation’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 10:31 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this "be-attitude of the heart." God bless you. A blessed New Year to your and your family.
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 3:39 PM
Lots of beautiful imagery to express your significant message here, geoffrey. I find it so ridiculous that our nation (both the leaders AND the people) Don't seem to understand the meaning of "compromise"
Brewer Avatar
February 15, 2020 at 4:29 AM
Thanks Andrea. I concur. There must be better games to play.
Awtry Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Geoffrey this is beautiful! The message of hope writ in the creation wonderfully described by your skilled pen... "And winter-stripped to elegant profile The leafless trees’ bare symmetry is seen"--poetry. A FAV for me :)
Brewer Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 7:05 AM
Thank you so much. PS. Your appreciation is always of great value to me.
Rees Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 8:52 AM
Where freedom doesn't reign, there are nevertheless tiny buds awaiting a sign to grow. Lovely ideas, beautifully expressed.
Brewer Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 10:11 AM
Many thanks for your wise and kind response, Peter.
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