Did I

When this present life fades away
And my life passes from dawn to dusk
What kind of path will I leave in my wake?
How had I walked, where did I put my trust?

What lasting legacy will I leave behind
For those who would follow after?
Did I live a life true to myself
Or strive only to gain man's favor?

Did I find true peace within?
Was this life worth the struggle?
Did I allow God live through me?
Did I let Him to carry my troubles?

Did these eyes show others compassion?
Did these lips speak words of love?
Did these hands help the needy?
Did my spirit rise above?

To know my purpose for living
These thoughts I must address
For when I am old, will my eyes be clear
Or cloudy with regret?




Originally written on 5/10/2007
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 8:33 PM
G'day Laura... I think on reflection, we all have some regrets in life, but with the questions you put in your poem give your answers as mostly positive outcomes, then you will have lived a fulfilling life - enjoyed - Lindsay
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June 7, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Fantastic write, Laura! I think everyone should look inside themselves and answer these questions before its too late. I know I need to! Thanks for sharing this! Love, KIm
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