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Raindrops balanced on a leaf look like diamonds, but they're not. The world could go on without diamonds. Without raindrops it would stop.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/6/2020 5:22:00 PM
I love it! "Without raindrops, it would stop!"
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Date: 1/13/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thank you, Andrew. Hope your new year is off to a good start!
Date: 3/14/2019 11:22:00 PM
excellent // like it// in yellow sunlight the raindrop is dropping down as the diamond glittering...////
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Date: 3/14/2019 11:37:00 PM
Thank you, very much Mahtab ~ps
Date: 3/14/2019 8:20:00 PM
Fabulous!
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Date: 3/14/2019 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Timothy you are too kind :) ~ps
Date: 3/14/2019 6:54:00 PM
Congratulations P.S. Well done indeed!
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Date: 3/14/2019 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Caren :) ~ps
Date: 11/21/2018 2:56:00 AM
oh so true P S Awtry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2018 4:34:00 AM
thank you Jan :)
Date: 11/19/2018 1:16:00 PM
I would much rather look at raindrops than diamonds. Lovely P.S.! Congratulations on your first placement in Brian's contest! : )
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Date: 11/19/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Connie :)
Date: 11/18/2018 11:06:00 AM
Succinct yet brilliant, P.S.! Congratulations on your win! Very well-deserved!
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Date: 11/18/2018 1:39:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/13/2018 11:24:00 AM
Beautiful and true! P.s. your on a roll.
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Date: 10/13/2018 2:06:00 PM
thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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