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Diamonds and Raindrops

Raindrops balanced on a leaf look like diamonds, but they're not. The world could go on without diamonds. Without raindrops it would stop.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Fairchild Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 5:22 PM
I love it! "Without raindrops, it would stop!"
Awtry Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Thank you, Andrew. Hope your new year is off to a good start!
Bangalee Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 11:22 PM
excellent // like it// in yellow sunlight the raindrop is dropping down as the diamond glittering...////
Awtry Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 11:37 PM
Thank you, very much Mahtab ~ps
Mcguire Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 8:20 PM
Fabulous!
Awtry Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 11:19 PM
Thank you Timothy you are too kind :) ~ps
Krutsinger Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations P.S. Well done indeed!
Awtry Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 11:19 PM
Thank you Caren :) ~ps
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 2:56 AM
oh so true P S Awtry:-) hugs Jan xx
Awtry Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 4:34 AM
thank you Jan :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:16 PM
I would much rather look at raindrops than diamonds. Lovely P.S.! Congratulations on your first placement in Brian's contest! : )
Awtry Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Thank you Connie :)
Ibeh Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Succinct yet brilliant, P.S.! Congratulations on your win! Very well-deserved!
Awtry Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Thank you :)
Rushing Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Beautiful and true! P.s. your on a roll.
Awtry Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 2:06 PM
thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
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