Diamond Sky

Loose diamonds scattered Stars flung across velvet sky Midnight blue sequined

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/15/2018 8:24:00 AM

Lovely, Bernard.

Bernard Chan
Date: 2/16/2018 4:43:00 AM

Thank you, Line!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/5/2017 7:00:00 AM

Hello Bernard, yes the stars look like diamonds in the sky. Make a wish on a big star it could come true. So they say. Have a nice day my friend.

Bernard Chan
Date: 9/5/2017 10:49:00 AM

We don't see big stars where I live, too much urban light pollution. But if I ever see one, I'll certainly make a wish. Thanks very much, Darlene :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/29/2017 8:56:00 PM

Ohhh, midnight dressed up for a night on the town! I love this! The imagery is amazing. Great write Bernard!

Bernard Chan
Date: 8/29/2017 9:23:00 PM

Susan, thank you so much. Appreciate it :)