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Diamond Mountain Cave

Diamond Mountain Cave (Phu Pha Phet Cave) The largest cave here in Thailand Has an eighteen acres in total size It is not that easy for us to find But if we’ll get in there, it’s a big surprise! We need to explore first the side of the mountain Be patient and careful to climb its lofty and rugged stair A shade half our way offers rest and we’ll not feel in vain Quite tedious, but an exquisite view awaits us up there The Diamond Mountain Cave has seven floors Most of the time, only two floors are offered for all Twenty rooms are more than enough for two to three hours tour After stooping down to get in through the very small entrance of the hall Public exploration is facilitated by its long wooden walkways As we tour in every chamber ,we’ll be impressed With our lens, we can’t resist to capture in every way The formations of stalagmites and stalactites that amaze To name the most captivating formation inside the cave Is the stalagmite in a very huge dinosaur-like egg in shape Standing prominently at the main hall, it’s my fave Coated with glittering diamond bits, I wish I can touch or scrape A form which isn’t funny but also with its wondrous beauty Is a man’s sword-like stone, no malice to catch our attention There are a lot more making us feel like dreamy Such as the amazing mushrooms and big jade stone It’s so fun to walk around on walkways going up and down, As we feel the cold wind coming in somewhere Ventilating and protecting us from sweat so as not to frown Then we’ll come out with big smiles and great experience to share. April 15, 2013
*man’s sword : the term I use for man’s sexual organ --I was there.
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Liwayway Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 9:29 AM
whoah!!! wow!! this poem of yours deserve a two thumbs up!! so creatively written poem..yes, I'm enjoying my grand vacation to the max!!hope you too after your final exam....thanks for dropping by....mwuah mwuah!!God bless you always my dear friend.. :) Hugssss!! Maria
Mcconnell Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 3:43 AM
really good, well constructed and enjoyable read. Caves are always interesting to see , have seen a few in UK and in south africa. well have a blessed day, Gordon
Anglesey Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 12:17 PM
Leonora, I love it when poetry is written from personal experience. It allows the reader to share a reality that they may have never know. Love reading about your reality.
Hicks Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 4:44 AM
It sounds like quite the memorable experience! Almost written like a journal, expect there's rhyme involved. This makes me want to write about my experiences in Britain... there were many things there worth the effort! Good attention to detail...
Kendrick Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 2:21 PM
Reads like an exciting experience that you had on that day...Caves are interesting places to visit..That is ones that have been prepared for visitors and not having to crawl into them with no light..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are encouraging..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 8:40 AM
a towering piece that mystifies... are you coming to manila?... let me know.. :) huggs!
Carrillo Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 4:46 PM
I loved this one. It is so nice to read these type of poems, because we always learn something new. thanks for sharing. Many blessings. I have a good friend that is from Thailand. He worked with me.... Lucilla
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 12:26 AM
dear Leonora, you sure make me wish I could see this wondrous cave with your apt description. VEry nicely done!
Burns Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 5:22 PM
Wondrous description of what sounds like a fascinating place. Thanks for your comments on my poem, O'er The Battlements I Do Roam. All my best, Terry.
A   Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 9:41 AM
Good morning my sweet and wonderful poetry sis. hoping you are well this wonderful morning... are you still up on your side of your world. I'm at work, and sitting down in front of my computer.... sending you hugs and smiles... xox~ Linda
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 3:43 AM
..... just want to wish you a lovely day, dear Leonora! - Big hug from Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 1:47 AM
Excellent. Stunning and interesting write. Enjoyed. Tfs
K. Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 12:17 AM
Reading this made me feel like I was in on that cave, I can imagine how awesome it must be to see this personally-- and I think, I would also be the same, wanting to touch those glittering formations...thanks for sharing this with us, for taking us with you :)
Ober Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Wow, what fantastic descriptions! I felt like I was there while reading this gem of a poem :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 10:35 AM
a space where words ans images meet.. just beautiful!...thanks for your messages... are you in manila now... please let me know!..:) huggs!
Tacito Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 8:45 AM
Can I look at Satun & Saturn both? I love planets. ;) But, seriously, this was a wonderful writing! Your making me want to travel afar again. My soul thanks you for that, in advance. :)
Hunter Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 8:19 AM
This is stunning, Leonora...I'd love to see it!
Ivy D Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 4:54 AM
Beautiful, your an exquisite poet' SandyIvy
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 3:12 AM
An exciting cave .... it is a tourist attraction (?) - An eventful poem Leonora, thank you for telling about it. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:53 PM
loving this poem, and adding it to on my favorite... xox..hugs...Linda
A   Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:52 PM
Leonora, an outstanding poem... I wish you could enter both poems in my contest. I love this poem. I like the way the caves in Thailand, inspired the experience of this poem. The beauty you share with us SIS, is wondrous and amazing. I have seen the stalagmite images in photos... I will take you up on the invite and google the caves... always~ Linda
Sivey Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 9:50 PM
This is a fascinating write my friend! I haven't yet looked up the cave on the internet, but I will after I get done with this comment! Your poem is dynamic and wondrously gorgeous my friend! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
Jones Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 9:34 PM
I find all caves most interesting and your poem beautiful.....
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