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Written, November 6, 2025
For The Contest, “Drop The Cliche”
Sponsor, Nette Onclaud

Diamond In The Rough

At the first meeting, we were not impressed.
His manner was disdainful and obsessed,
acting as if he wished to be in charge,
as this new neighbor walked to our garage.

Yet, first impressions are not always key.
We learned this when my husband hurt his knee.
In charge for sure, this “diamond in the rough,”
took over our yard work without a huff.
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Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2025 at 11:10 PM
So sweet what this means. I really like it congrats on the win
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