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Diamond In the Rough

Diamond in the Rough Hobbes *Quick Note* Poem for my mate, I love him so much =) I have always thought something was special about you. There's always been a glimmer in your eye. And now I know all my assumptions were true, And it makes me want to break down and cry. But these are tears of joy I shed Of that you shouldn't doubt. And all the words I wish I'd said, I want to scream and shout. Cause I found you A Diamond in the Rough. You have opened my eyes, my heart, and my mind. I love the way you always make me feel. My vision is clear where I was once blind. You've fixed something I thought would never heal. I couldn't love you more it seems, Of that you can be sure. And when I'm with you, my smile beams, You make this tiger purr. And I love you, My Diamond in the Rough. Now I'm craving you even more and more. And I wish I could move the land and seas. So when we're apart it makes my heart sore. Because your love is like a gental breeze. It can be hard, and that's no lie, But I am always here. We always find ways too get by, And never have to fear. And I am yours, My Diamond in the Rough.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/21/2009 4:22:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Calvin. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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