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Diamond In the Rough

I may break, I may bend, I may not be The greatest friend. I say mean things, Sometimes I'm rude. Don't always have The best attitude. A stubborn streak That holds on tight. To break it, Is a constant fight. I make mistakes, But life is tough. After all, I'm still a Diamond in the rough.

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Michael Jordan

Date: 7/15/2009 4:37:00 PM

Erica - Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s contest – I apologize for it taking so long for me to say it, God Bless, MJ

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/28/2009 6:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem placing in the contest! :) Well done!~ Carrie

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/27/2009 11:21:00 PM

Erica, congrats with your placement in Nathan's contest...Raul

Nathan Leccese

Date: 6/27/2009 8:45:00 PM

Congratulations on Honorable Mention in my contest! Nate

John Rhinem

Date: 6/12/2009 1:20:00 PM

Smile~Well, to some degree, we have all been diamonds in the rough within our lives....The good news is for most, life is an ever evolving polishing, of our hearts, souls and minds!!? So, judging from Your open write here precious Erica, you are well upon Your way, to a shining finish I believe someday!! So don't stop writing; for it may be a polishing tool, upon the path of Your glow!!? Much Warmth & Love to You & Your Loves, John!!"~"Have A Very Lovely Day!!":):) Bye ~