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Diamond, Dust, Devil

Cluster, bright, shining, Sound echoing to a distant whining, Beautiful elegant and mesmerising, perfection; flawless and tantalising, A diamond; lust for the finger to wear Eyes interlocked by the powers of hypnotic charm, Beckoning by the wearer of gifts Taking, forsaken a contract exchanged with this prince of illusion, Seconds follow immediate confusion, Live glows an elegant sparkle Before the wearer becomes aware of his demise, Smoke rings of ferocious fire Consume and burn skin like flakes of papyrus The diamond a duller hue As the body disintegrates in a mound of insignificant dust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/29/2014 6:49:00 PM
JOHN, , EPIC WRITE, EPIC WIN.... CONGRATS... LUV ~LINDA
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Date: 5/28/2014 9:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, john
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Date: 5/28/2014 7:12:00 PM
JOHN, Congrats---- thank you for supporting my "Diamond Dust, Devil" contest. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:25:00 PM
Wow, John...and I am wearing one of those on my finger! Enjoyed your writing.
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Date: 5/5/2014 1:35:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, John :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2014 4:28:00 PM
Hey, John, , your first poem was enjoyable. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:52:00 PM
Hi John, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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