Lansell Taudevin Poet Diamante

Diamond 2

Diamond 2

                       Dead
                 A final word
                Why not say it
            Forget the platitudes
         They don’t change things
     Nor do they make anything better
  Truth means more when does not hide
      Behind the façade of the facile.
          I am not alone in weeping
             Others have also lost
                 Passed on? No.
                        Dead

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Marilyn Williams December 8, 2017 at 9:12 AM This most appealing to me in the shape of a diamond. Very ambious. Congrats on your Featired to share.

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2016 at 4:18 PM I agree with Silent One's comment below. You do well expressing your feelings. I believe we have spirits that go on. No one can really say.