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Image result for pictures of diamonds when they come out of the earth and after they are changed

Diamond

A double Fibonnaci with one reversed

Deep

In

Earth's depths

A dazzling

Surprise waits ages

Formed by pressure, resplendent, bold

A diamond emerges, symbol of strength this rock

In the rough, it may appear unrefined but in its depths

A radiance defined, luster

Captures the sun's light

Testament

To its

Great 

Change

artshape

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Howard Kerr

April 17, 2026 at 9:25 PM

Congratulations, Sara. I like this informative work so beautifully written. Well deserved win, Howard

Sara Kendrick

April 18, 2026 at 7:41 AM

Thank you, Howard, for dropping by with congratulations. Your comments add a special touch. Sara K

Frances Schiavina

February 4, 2024 at 7:00 AM

Brilliant in its transitional contrast from dark depths to sun brilliancy. Congratulations Sara.

Sara Kendrick

February 4, 2024 at 8:14 AM

Thank you, Frances. I appreciate the kind review plus congratulations. Sara k

Panagiota Romios

January 22, 2024 at 9:23 PM

Astounding work Sara! Its not as easy as i looks Sparkles with brilliance like the diamond! Pangie xx

Sara Kendrick

January 23, 2024 at 12:59 AM

Panagiota, your visit is encouraging. Sara K

Susan Ashley

January 22, 2024 at 5:57 PM

Oh this is beautiful, Sara! Indeed, your poem describes the formation of a diamond so poetically, and beautifully in its shape too. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

January 23, 2024 at 12:59 AM

Thank you, Susan. Don't we all need the warmth even if it is in wishes right about now. Sara K

David Fisher

January 22, 2024 at 4:41 PM

Nice shaped poem, Sarah. You've turned a diamond of a poem into man and women's best friend. And congrats on the win!

Sara Kendrick

January 23, 2024 at 12:58 AM

So nice of you to drop by David. I appreciate you reading it and saying congratulations. Sara K

J. I. Thomas F.

January 22, 2024 at 3:21 PM

Cool subject and interesting form. Congrats on the win!

Sara Kendrick

January 23, 2024 at 12:57 AM

Thank you J.I., for stopping by with congrats. Sara K

Jeanette Swan

January 22, 2024 at 2:55 PM

Yes, it is such a contrast, the rock formed deep underground in unimaginable forces that can only dazzle in the light. What made people ever go looking there to find out that there were treasures?

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2024 at 3:11 PM

Jeanette, I think some investigation of the diamond might be good to see how it came to be. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K

Ink Empress

January 22, 2024 at 7:01 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win in brians contest, well deserved and well done, always a pleasure seeing you in winners list. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2024 at 8:00 AM

Thank you, IE. I appreciate your visit with congrats. Sara K

Sotto Poet

January 22, 2024 at 6:03 AM

Quite imaginative, well-designed, and an excellent poem. Many congratulations on your win! Sara

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2024 at 6:14 AM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

January 22, 2024 at 2:48 AM

Well written poem in this diamond form poem.

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2024 at 4:04 AM

Thank you, Victor. Your visits add a tasty morsel. Sara K

Howard Kerr

January 22, 2024 at 1:17 AM

Congratulations Sarah on your premiere contest selection. Yours is a vastly superior shape poem based on scientific facts. Yet it the shape poem never sacrifices its literary soul Howard

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2024 at 4:04 AM

Howard, I appreciate your visit to let me know that I placed in the contest. I will have to check it out. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

January 21, 2024 at 7:44 PM

Very nice! Hidden in the depths, the beauty of a diamond some of which one day will make a bride blush!

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2024 at 4:03 AM

Thank you, Kim. Amazing what they are and what they can become just like people. Sara K

Ink Empress

January 21, 2024 at 12:50 PM

I love the shape you’ve created with this creative write; and i love how both your fibs flow so well. You’ve described diamonds and their formation so well. I love how insightful and engaging this poem is: pleasure always reading your work dear sara. Hope weather is ok there now? I heard in california the weather seems stormy after ages. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick

January 21, 2024 at 2:07 PM

Thank you, IE. I appreciate the kind review of my work. The weather here in the south is cold, windy, but sunny for the last two days. We are warm and safe which is a good thing. Some are not so lucky due to many reasons. Sara K