Diamante Ii

Sun
                           brillant ball
                  burning, heating, searing
                  Fire, Aten, Rainbow, Iris
                 cooling, pouring, caressing
                            misty wet
                                Rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 3:56 PM
Sue well here you hear you are though, as before, you wear it well - once again just a pleasure to read - God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 1:15 PM
Excellent diamante!! I loved this one! ~ love, Carrie
Higgins Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 12:18 PM
I love the flow from brilliant ball to misty wet rain..very cool..Loved this.
Degenhardt Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 11:39 AM
Love the imagery of the sun and rain in this piece. Perfect in form and a pure pleasure to read. Michael
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