Diamante Ii

Sun brillant ball burning, heating, searing Fire, Aten, Rainbow, Iris cooling, pouring, caressing misty wet Rain

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Michael Jordan

Date: 2/11/2009 3:56:00 PM

Sue well here you hear you are though, as before, you wear it well - once again just a pleasure to read - God Bless, MJ

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/11/2009 1:15:00 PM

Excellent diamante!! I loved this one! ~ love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/11/2009 12:18:00 PM

I love the flow from brilliant ball to misty wet rain..very cool..Loved this.

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/11/2009 11:39:00 AM

Love the imagery of the sun and rain in this piece. Perfect in form and a pure pleasure to read. Michael