Diamante I

down
                                                goes the
                                            curtain on this
                                     moonless night of stars
                                             I spread out
                                                and look
                                                     up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 14, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Jenny, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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September 12, 2013 at 7:32 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week, jenny
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August 30, 2013 at 4:42 PM
hi Jenny, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat
Dumaine Backlund Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Hi Skat, Thanks for the warm welcome! Glad to have found poetry soup as a forum for sharing my poetry with other poets and receiving comments, suggestions, observations. Also looking forward to doing the same for others. Hoping we can all support each other in this journey!
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August 30, 2013 at 1:47 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Jenny !- Like your diamante ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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August 31, 2013 at 7:07 AM
Thanks for the tip about the comments, Anne-Lise, and for taking the time to reach out!
A   Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 10:05 AM
a cool one, Dumaine , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Dumaine Backlund Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:08 AM
Thanks for the welcome and the contest invite! I'll be sure to check it out.
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