Diamante

Parent Biological, single Loving,caring,teaching Nurture, guardian, offspring, juvenile Growing,playing,crying Innocent, vulnerable Children Sponsor:Joseph May Contest: Diamante 6/10/19 1st place

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/26/2019 12:31:00 PM

I love the last couple of lines especially. Congratulations on your win.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/26/2019 2:45:00 PM

Thank you Jeanne so much!;)

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/25/2019 10:09:00 PM

I liked your choice of subjects..parent to children, Brenda. Well done and congrats on your win! :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/26/2019 2:25:00 AM

Laura thank you! Well I was born to be a mother so it only seemed fit!;)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/25/2019 8:43:00 PM

Lovely, Brenda:-) Congrats on your win!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/26/2019 2:25:00 AM

Thank you so much Edward! Much appreciated!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/25/2019 7:05:00 PM

Beautiful progression from parent to children, Brenda. Thrilled for you for this wonderful poem and well-deserved win! :) gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/25/2019 7:06:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershson! ;)

Joseph May

Date: 6/25/2019 6:07:00 PM

Wonderful write Brenda, Congrats on your win..

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/25/2019 6:47:00 PM

Thank you Joseph! I am honored you thought it good enough!;) it was my first time writing this form!;)

John Fleming

Date: 6/23/2019 2:30:00 PM

I had not heard of a "Diamante" before...I am now the more wiser for having read your clever little poem ; a lovely sounding word...I thought it might well be a reference to a Greek Goddess such is its loveliness. Nicely done, Brenda. Lots of affection of course. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/24/2019 10:00:00 PM

Ah see I just learned it as I entered the contest haha! I hope I did it right! See your poems are something I would love to be able to write!;) All my affection B;)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/12/2019 8:01:00 PM

Ah, so beautifully done, my dear twinster! You said it all in just a few precious and well-chosen words. Your mama bear heart shines with love, warmth, protection and appreciation for your babies (no matter how old they are..lol!). Lil puff puff is so lucky to have a grandma like you, my sweet sissy. Superb writing, Dragon Fire! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you! Love and hugs.. ~the saner of us two (I think.. ha!) :))

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/26/2019 2:47:00 PM

Lol ahh you there are times I wonder are you truly sane sissy! Yes fir proof it all!;)

Susan Ashley
Date: 6/13/2019 7:07:00 AM

Lol! Yes, a shape changer and a bbq, both great ideas, my dear twin! :)) As for the tree house renovation, all materials will be fire-proof (keeping puff puff in mind of course). After she set the Unicorns manes on fire, they refused to go to their wing unless I made it fire retardant and kept hoof-friendly fire extinguishers available.. we’ll talk about the new treehouse plans with bro bro this weekend ;) the sane one <3

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/13/2019 2:22:00 AM

Ahh my sane sissy! Yes I should be a shape shifter going from mama bear to dragon to heck the list goes on lol! I am glad you enjoyed sister dear! So when will we begin the construction of our new treehouse mansion? You know I must know as to keep puff puff away! Lmao! We need lots of fire proof material and we need a west wing an east wing and bro bro will he want a south or north wing! Lol probably the one that has the most sun light he is so bright lol! Thank you did stopping by! And barbecue this weekend? Puff puff will start the coals! ;) Your insane sissy!;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2019 7:16:00 PM

you did this so well. I have to hurry and think up some good opposites like you did!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/13/2019 2:17:00 AM

Thank you Andrea I'm glad you liked it! Yes I busted my brain trying to think of opposites! Anyway one that I didn't think everyone would use! Wanted to be a bit more unique! Thank you for stopping by!;)