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3/27/2025 for Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Poetry Contest sponsored by Charles Messina

Good and browned, for you, a pancake round, flipped and stacked, a joy so profound, or perhaps, I'll share, a waffle square, with pear for extraordinary flair. Flair, is great for a flapjack of wheat, square, wonderful for a Belgian treat. Profound, indeed, is a poppy seed - round about now, that's just what I need sprinkled upon a lemon muffin.

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Date: 3/28/2025 12:13:00 PM
Hello David Crandall, I prefer the waffle. I like to put jam on them. or raisins. Also sometimes cheese. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/29/2025 10:47:00 AM
Hello David Crandall, it is good. i have them often. I will. Enjoy yoour weekend. Cheers!! /Darlene/
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David Crandall
Date: 3/28/2025 12:36:00 PM
That sounds pretty darn good to me Darlene! Have a great day!
Date: 3/27/2025 11:04:00 PM
Lol, you've made us all hungry now David Good luck in the contest.. Tom
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David Crandall
Date: 3/28/2025 12:36:00 PM
haha - thanks Tom!
Date: 3/27/2025 6:12:00 PM
now your making me hungry, lemony sounds good anytime. :)
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David Crandall
Date: 3/27/2025 6:30:00 PM
I made myself hungry too :-)
Date: 3/27/2025 5:11:00 PM
Great poem, nice ending. I just love lemon poppyseed muffins. You make a great breakfast poem. Delicious.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/27/2025 5:48:00 PM
haha - thanks!

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