Notes About The Poem
Written late one night in July 2016

Diagnosis

Written for Andrea Dietrich, a remarkable, talented human and sincere, caring friend
I’ve never even met her, we’ve never shared space, Yet I continuously, tenderly, view her face. She woke one same ole’ morn, on her same ole’ street To retire that night with terror lying under her sheets. She’s always been conscientious, responsible and prepared, But she’s never dealt with this brand of scared. It isn’t that bad news had never before appeared, It just hadn’t carried such fierce shades as it neared. I feel her frightened ache tremble and I silently shake. My faith demands I believe He did not cruelly forsake One who never selfishly sought her own delight Over her commitments to living proper and right. It must feel surreal to her that the world is the same When her life’s been yanked, injured and maimed. Everything must surely seem foreign and strange As she struggles through fears web just to maintain. Rudely, she was handed a nightmare wrapped in unfair That I desperately wish my emotional sum could repair.
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Roberts Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Touching and we'll written full of compassion. I sure hope Andreas doing better she's a delight. MAY I ask you for help in setting up a blog? I can know see everyone else's but Not how to start my own (or possibly monetize) any helpful direction is appreciated. ..
Inman Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 11:46 AM
A wonderful write for a very special person CayCay.
Duet Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 12:18 PM
P.S. I just hope and pray your friend will heal and bounce back from whatever happened to her. It's so nice that she has your support.
Duet Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Life is not always fair is it...and you clearly illustrated that here in this poem. Life and love test our faith and our strength sometimes. That's just the way it is.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 4:09 AM
What a glorious gift as Andrea's birthday approaches September fifth. You are a wonderful friend. I know how much this kind of support means to our dear Andrea CayCay. She has my prayers, my distant healing reiki and my ear whenever she needs cheering. I am pretty sure this poem will make her month! 7 ; ) Love, Connie
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September 3, 2016 at 10:42 AM
Dear Caycay, your poem here truly moved me. you are one of the kindest and most intuitive persons i have met in my life. We will be friends forever, dear. Thanks for this. i appreciate it so much. A fave and one to be printed out!
Godwin Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 10:46 AM
From my heart, Sweetie - the only medicinal aid I have to offer. Love and hugs ... CayCay
Turner Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 9:00 AM
You are a kind and loving friend, CayCay. This is a wonderful write about an extremely strong and positive lady. We are all praying for her full recovery.
Gupta Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Very true ... We all agree ... You have said it beautifully ... Her positive belief is admirable ... Thanks for sharing the moving tribute ...
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 12:52 AM
CayCay this is a wonderful tribute to a remarkable poet who I am honoured to call my friend. Keeping her in my thoughts and prayers for a full recovery - I know she is doing everything she can to get herself well and her positive attitude will bring her though:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 2, 2016 at 10:16 PM
CayCay this is so touching and beautiful, Andrea is such a kind and wonderful person, I hope she knows, even from afar we are holding her hand and are here for her even if is just to listen! Your poem just flows so well and rolls of the tongue! Hugs!
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September 2, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Oh, this is such a touching tribute to Andrea, CayCay! Many of us are keeping her in our prayers for a full recovery. You convey the emotional tribulations and fears so well in this powerful poem. May she find peace Turing her trial.
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