Dharma Haiku 11 21 2014

scorpion drowning monk saves him and it stings monk monk laughs heartily Note on this haiku: dharma: right way; To a monk saving one is dharma, to a scorpion act of stinging is dharma. They both are right. So monk laughs. dharma/haiku 21 11 2014 © rajat kanti chakrabarty

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/21/2014 3:40:00 AM

Scorpion's dharma/ Monk's karma/dharma Necessity's design:comedy/tragedy Deep as the ocean, my friend Rajat! Excellent! A seven for content and expression!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/21/2014 4:22:00 AM

Haha Demetrios you are a genius. Love.take care XXXX RAJAT

Martin Lochner

Date: 11/21/2014 1:44:00 AM

my first 7 on this site. A brilliant and insightful poem. Well done!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/21/2014 2:24:00 AM

Thank you Martin for visiting. Love XXXX RAJAT