Dewy Saturday




            Fogged break of the day
            A new damp newspaper rests
            On the rubber mat


            English Haiku 5,7,5
            (Does not require all lower case)


            January 25, 2020
                 10am PST



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Krutsinger Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Love it that you have made a newspaper and a rubber mat into a poem!
Romios Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 2:33 PM
You know what? I never saw it that way.LOL Panagiota xx
Gauthier Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:35 PM
Love your imagery, Panagiota.
Romios Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:57 PM
Oh, Line, I do thank you....))) Humbly, Panagiota
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 2:20 PM
When the fog breaks the day it is not so thick. Easier to see what is in front of you. have a nice day my friend. Hugs,
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:51 PM
Hello Penagiota,oh okay the fog enchants you like a handsome prince. I do like this. jave a nice evening my friend.xx Darlene
Romios Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:37 PM
Darlene, I answered this earlier but it disappeared? Please forgive me? The fog enchants me like a handsome Prince! ))? Panagiota xx
Michael Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 2:12 PM
An image we have grown to expect...nice imagery here...
Romios Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 2:39 PM
OMG! Sorry, I am late in responding, Arturo. Some who love imagery, and used to respond to my poetry, No longer do. I have no idea why. They stopped when another follower of mine got into a huff and left as I did not respond to him in record time? Conceited as all get out. Good grief. Panagiota xx
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:43 PM
Love the image Panagiota, fog coming off the bay. Tom
Romios Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Good Day Tom. Having problems with my regular email.so if I respond late, do please understand? Fog is simply wonderful. Near the ocean is best. I just f'ind it mystical. Maybe I am weird! Panagiota xx
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