Dewdrop

absence of a melody
          was wrenching
          on the face of a song

surface tension –
a venom creeps
surging in twin black eyes

you raise your price
in extremes
unburdening of embryonic waste

outsider
matches his death
          with antiquity 


SATISH VERMA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 8:00 PM
enjoyed...keep sharing!
Galua Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 6:02 AM
very creative write Satish...with original metaphors...I enjoy it...thanks for the share..I kind of forget sometimes but if you like me to read some of your poems...pls shoot me a message,,,thank you ^_^ v
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 5:56 AM
I especially like the first stanza..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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