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absence of a melody was wrenching on the face of a song surface tension – a venom creeps surging in twin black eyes you raise your price in extremes unburdening of embryonic waste outsider matches his death with antiquity SATISH VERMA

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Date: 6/19/2010 8:00:00 PM
enjoyed...keep sharing!
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:02:00 AM
very creative write Satish...with original metaphors...I enjoy it...thanks for the share..I kind of forget sometimes but if you like me to read some of your poems...pls shoot me a message,,,thank you ^_^ v
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:56:00 AM
I especially like the first stanza..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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