Notes About The Poem
Because Issa's life was marked by tragic deaths in his family, most of the ku he wrote highlighted the theme on dew, an attempt to depict such as a common symbol of demise, of fleeting wheeze of life...Sotto Poet's Issa Kobayashi inspired Contest

dew on dew


cascade of pearled dew --

        slithering on frail petals 

   becomes winter tears

~

               fresh ash in urn

  strewn across gusty winds --

                             autumn burial
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Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara K. 📖❤️
Croft Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 2:29 PM
congrats on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 5:48 AM
Sad one. I hope not a recent death of someone close. Sara K.
Greece Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:49 AM
Charged with sensitivity of nature!
Hind Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 8:32 PM
just breathtaking, Nette!! "becomes winter tears" dew!!
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