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Dew

golden rays of sun
falling on silvery beads ~
diamonds sparkle

25.07.2021

10th gradehaiku

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Gershon Wolf

July 30, 2021 at 9:27 AM

An image gleaming and glistening you have created here, Rama. So pretty! ~ Shine on, Gershon

Aniruddha Pathak

July 29, 2021 at 12:33 AM

How beautiful to talk of dew, beauty blessing beauty

Caren Krutsinger

July 28, 2021 at 9:05 PM

ahh poetically sound. Gorgeous!

Joanna Daniel

July 28, 2021 at 7:48 AM

Lovely, just describing it the poetic way:)

Sara Kendrick

July 27, 2021 at 12:09 PM

Very descriptive work. I enjoyed reading the morning lines. I enjoy seeing the dew when I can. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Supraja Kannan

July 26, 2021 at 4:39 AM

Such a beautiful imagery...

Vijay Pandit

July 25, 2021 at 2:28 PM

I see the diamonds sparkling through dew--splendid images you created, Rama.

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 25, 2021 at 11:53 AM

Hello Ramqa, this is beautifully done. blessings my friend.

Rama Balasubramanian

July 26, 2021 at 12:08 AM

Thanks Darlene!m

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 25, 2021 at 3:32 PM

Hello Rama, this poem is beautifully done. Blessings my friend.

Eve Roper

July 25, 2021 at 11:28 AM

beautiful imagery, Rama. About the book my book shelf states that 31 units have sold and I am making 4 cents a unit. I think, a unit is 1 published book. Which I knew I wasn't going to make any money on the books. I did it more for all of you and the entertainment of doing it. I don't have much in my life to do then just be creative with the help of the Lord.

Christuraj Alex

July 25, 2021 at 10:11 AM

So beautiful.

Dew

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