Devotion To the Ocean

An ivory pearl rests gently upon her shell; she feels the ease of the breeze upon water- ripples of new beginnings are soft when there’s beauty inside a clam. The teal and tangerine coral plays with fleeting fins, lost in sight as seahorses tenderly sway. Angelfish dive with enthusiasm as the sea otters play on mossy mounds of oceanic rock. A kaleidoscope of crimson, cobalt and medallion gleam through the mist- for a jellyfish startles and all creatures bow. So, I tarry along the pebbled shore of the ocean; try to embrace how it must feel to have only thoughts of the here and now. An ivory pearl rests gently upon her shell--- I smile at the ocean and bid a fine farewell
August 4, 2019 Devotion to the Ocean Contest

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Date: 8/16/2019 3:09:00 AM
- Beautifully written, L.L. ... enjoy reading - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2019 12:00:00 AM
Great poem LuLoo. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/15/2019 9:55:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Laura, congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
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Date: 8/15/2019 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Luloo. You have lovely imagery in your entry. Beautiful! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/5/2019 12:58:00 PM
Magic, in words. Lovely my friend. Ann (tiny elves in swim trunks waiting in my car for a trip to the big blue.)
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Date: 8/4/2019 5:40:00 PM
This is gorgeous....i love the ocean, and just watching the sunrise over it while treasures tumble in the waves as dolphins play near the breaks...great poem :) hugs
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