Devoted

Devoted to the ocean am I,
ever since I was a small fry.

Daddy taught me to swim,
the first time I was in with him.

Diving from the steps at the pier,
the higher the dive, the louder the cheer.

Few things compare to a skinny dip,
running in unseen in the nip.

In summer when the seawater heats,
I just can't wait to bathe my feet.

Even in winter when seagulls screech,
it's soothing to walk along the beach.

Cares and worries drift away
as I walk along the bay.

Blessed am I to live close by,
when devoted to the ocean am I.



04/08/2019
For Chantelle Anne Cooke's contest
Devoted To The Ocean

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/16/2019 2:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2019 12:14:00 AM
I love your beautiful entry Jean. Lovely memories. We both live on islands by the sea. Congratulations on your deserving podium win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/5/2019 7:17:00 AM
A charming write, Jean--sweet memories...all the best.
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/5/2019 1:48:00 PM
Hello again Vijay. Nice to see you.
Date: 8/5/2019 5:01:00 AM
- Sounds wonderful, Jean :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/5/2019 5:42:00 AM
When I see your name I always smile Sunshine.
Date: 8/4/2019 7:48:00 PM
Elegantly stated, Jean. True devotion to that ocean. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/5/2019 4:47:00 AM
Thank you Gershon.
Date: 8/4/2019 5:56:00 PM
this is lovely, jean! you're lucky to live where you do...
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/4/2019 6:59:00 PM
Hi Ilene. Lovely as always to see you here. Yes...as the song goes "Thank God we're surrounded by water." here in Ireland.
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