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Devious Woman

A viscous heart, a liar A mind of hatred She’s hurtful, untrustworthy Nothing is fervid It’s all in her eyes She is very devious Heartless terrorize Russell Sivey Form Seguidilla

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/4/2012 1:31:00 PM

sounds like my ex - powerful write, my friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/4/2012 7:55:00 AM

i'm loving the way you write segudilla, russell.. this one is filled with sensory images of an unusual woman... terrific flow!.. thanks for considering my autumn poem for you; i had a blast and did a shadorma--how hard!..:) huggs and love

Don Johnson

Date: 11/4/2012 12:05:00 AM

do love n hate seperate, by the thin ness of a rhyme, love is hate upon your plate, same passion, hurting time...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/3/2012 10:39:00 PM

MARVELOUS PORTRAIT OF A NAUGHTY FEMME FATALE RUSSELL LUV .. HOPE MOST LADIES R OF FINER QUALITY .. THANKXX FOR MY FIRST PLACE WIN IN AUTUMN AIR .. AM HONORED U ENJOYED .. AM STILL HAVING LOTS OF TROUBLE TRYING TO COMMENT ON YOUR POEMS AS WELL AS OTHERS .. SORRY BOUT THAT MY FRIEND ..

Elizabeth O'Driscoll

Date: 11/3/2012 7:44:00 PM

whoever she is stay away from her, she sure don't sound very nice, enjoyed love elizabeth