Devious Woman

A viscous heart, a liar A mind of hatred She’s hurtful, untrustworthy Nothing is fervid It’s all in her eyes She is very devious Heartless terrorize
Russell Sivey Form Seguidilla
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horne Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 1:31 PM
sounds like my ex - powerful write, my friend.
Onclaud Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 7:55 AM
i'm loving the way you write segudilla, russell.. this one is filled with sensory images of an unusual woman... terrific flow!.. thanks for considering my autumn poem for you; i had a blast and did a shadorma--how hard!..:) huggs and love
Johnson Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 12:05 AM
do love n hate seperate, by the thin ness of a rhyme, love is hate upon your plate, same passion, hurting time...
Sweetheart Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 10:39 PM
MARVELOUS PORTRAIT OF A NAUGHTY FEMME FATALE RUSSELL LUV .. HOPE MOST LADIES R OF FINER QUALITY .. THANKXX FOR MY FIRST PLACE WIN IN AUTUMN AIR .. AM HONORED U ENJOYED .. AM STILL HAVING LOTS OF TROUBLE TRYING TO COMMENT ON YOUR POEMS AS WELL AS OTHERS .. SORRY BOUT THAT MY FRIEND ..
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November 3, 2012 at 7:44 PM
whoever she is stay away from her, she sure don't sound very nice, enjoyed love elizabeth
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