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Devil-Angel

Devil
Dark, evil
Twisting, manipulating, tormenting
Struggle between right and wrong
Persuading, reassuring, convincing
Light, righteous
Angel

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Susan Ashley

November 21, 2017 at 9:45 PM

A dynamic Diamante John. Great contrast with your two opposites and your center line is a great pivot point. Excellent write my friend!

John Michaels

November 25, 2017 at 9:14 AM

Wow! Now we are going back. I hardly ever write this form any more - I used this (and Haiku) as a springboard to break me into the world of poetry! Thanks for the kind comments. Regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

May 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM

a good diamante. I see you really like these shorter forms!!

John Michaels

May 25, 2014 at 3:25 AM

Thanks! Yes, they are my preference... I sometimes struggle with the longer styles as I tend to get carried away and over-write, then spend ages cutting it down. With shorter forms (Haiku especially) it really disciplines me into focusing on what's important. Having said that, I'll poke around in my collection and see if I can find something different to submit soon!

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