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(Contest entry: "A "Gun"-o-ku")

Devil Gun

Guns are the devil
Reincarnated metal
When in evil hands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horstkotter Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 9:25 PM
Very nice haiku.
Song Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 1:02 AM
A personifying delight! Cold metal yet from the hot coals of hell...nice dichotomy.
Williams Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 4:49 PM
Yours was amazing. I love it just like the first time I saw it. Congrats.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:40 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Gigno xx
A   Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 9:09 PM
Hi Gingo, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 4:59 PM
yes they are !!! !!! xox~ LINDA
Poet Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 2:19 AM
"!!!"
Dillard Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 1:05 PM
Good luck with this neat Haiku! It should serve you well! RAY
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 12:41 PM
Love it!!
A   Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 6:30 AM
!!!
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