Detoured

Whirlwind takes revenge. Swirls leaves like small tornado. Mountainside ambush!

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/31/2010 9:15:00 PM

and I myself was taken into that ambush! action-packed haiku you have in here, Marty :) keep it coming :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/31/2010 6:21:00 PM

nicely penned, enjoyed reading today

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/31/2010 5:52:00 PM

Cool Action Haiku, Marty-Robert

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/31/2010 5:31:00 PM

I like it... very much. (And thank you for reading my poetry.) Smiles, Dane

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/31/2010 2:37:00 PM

Lively brrrrrrrr Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2010 10:02:00 AM

VEry cool haiku, Marty. Thanks for your comments today and btw, I hope you didn't think I was the subject of the one poem.Somebody else did, but I rarely refer to myself in the third person! And also, I write alot about imagined characters. LUv,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/31/2010 7:37:00 AM

Check Yahoo mail for completion..luv..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/31/2010 3:44:00 AM

Hi Marty! Great : Whirlwind takes revenge! Thank you for sharing this Haiku with us. Still some snow flakes circling here. And thanky for your comment on Rescue of Dreams...Gert

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/31/2010 3:35:00 AM

How nature plays before the eyes , nice Marty thanks Daniel

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2010 8:45:00 PM

Especially enjoyed the last line .. ambush is how I felt a few days ago... but with all your luv and many poets coaxing.. here I am commenting again on your creative and visual Haiku... such a special bond between certain poets and we have created our own interior family within a family now.. luv.. talk tomorrow about the collab..luv.. Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2010 8:18:00 PM

Great image of the leaves circling, Marty. Nice haiku! Love, Carolyn

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/30/2010 8:15:00 PM

A vivid poem. I enjoyed it.