Detour

Detour in the road - keep left;
An unexpected fork
Took us on a wooded journey.
We were somewhere in New York.

We likely chose the way that was
The one that was mistaken,
So here we are, an hour later,
Feeling quite forsaken.

A stream of cars ahead of us
And equally behind,
All inching on except for those
With U-turns in their mind.

A mile to go, or so it says,
Until the Thruway link.
What’s up ahead I do not know,
Afraid to even think.

Another fine example of
A nice day gone awry,
With nothing we can do 
Except to shake our heads and sigh.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:34 PM
the detours can be frustrating even here on our little island,,, but thankfully we dont have the massive volume of traffic you have in NYC:-) hugs jan xx
Watt Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 11:18 AM
i imagine this is how the people driving to woodstock felt in 1969. at least you had each other (and maybe some good music?) to keep you company.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:50 AM
"shake our heads and sigh" - we are dong so much more of that these days!
Leffanta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 10:57 AM
All roads lead to Rome, except in Leighton Buzzard, where all roads lead to Leighton Buzzard . . . . .
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