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Destinys Dawning

When the clouds of yesterday are fading. A ray of light comes into sight for what you have been waiting. A shadow of the past in memories are cast. Tomorrows sun will soon begin what wasn't meant to last. Life begins a brand new dream in every dawning day. Take your heart down off the shelf to see what comes your way. The view you have behind that wall will never let you see. All the hope and all the love and possibility. When the sun comes upsde down. And fortunes fool is follies clown. The stars come out like magic dust. To dry the tears and remove the rust. After all the channels change and detiny starts to feel strange. The apple cart is all upset , you have to rearrange. Play the game no matter what the end resut might be. Soon enough, it will be over, that's our only guarantee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/1/2013 10:25:00 AM
this poem has a lot of wisdom in it. yes, every day has so much possibility but it will soon all be over (hopefully, not too soon!). still, there's plenty of time left to write a few more poems...
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Date: 7/24/2013 2:57:00 PM
forgot to give the rating!!
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Date: 7/24/2013 2:53:00 PM
wow, Robert. this is really good. one of your best!! a 7 for sure. And hey, why don't you take that ice cube challenge Skat gave us? Maybe it will inspire a tortured poem from you!!!
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Date: 7/23/2013 6:13:00 PM
This is a really great piece. I love the way it is written and I love the rhyme! :) Very nice work.
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