Destiny, Is Calling Me

....And we knew that life was not our own ?
Kiss the sky her moon she waits; diamond formations
Pearly gates there is no verse to claim this dust: whence borne
Clarity, be visions his burnt ashes their macabre tis no phoenix rising
A theatrical tomb ? Ten thousand shores gathered aneath her sea; fantastical
Lotus lores where diablo sleeps: in hedges be six where time she creeps....
Shadows lurk of broken prose idyllic concessions, fragmented rhyme ? Phantom pages
Flaming tides leviathan swirls a swift reply ? Sickled cross the child awakes; crimson love her reaper, plays.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 20, 2014 at 9:36 PM
Hello Jeremy, Thanks so much for your kind words on my poem. It is dedicated to my Sister, who passed away in 2009. Your writing is exceptional. Really really good. Love the line, Ten thousand shores gathered a neath her sea. Thanks for sharing your writes. Peace, Deborah
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March 30, 2014 at 5:50 PM
JEREMY, WOW.... I LOVE THE BEAUTY FOUND IN THIS POEM!!!!! Phantom Pages, diamond formation... The imagery feels epic, right into my heart. In this I feel the power of death, aroused by the vision of love... Once again, I love the poem... This time it had no bedtime stories, singing my sweet dreams with lullabies of unicorns riding in search for a stillborn. :) I might be a little crazy, I feel the poem calling my ambition. Sending hugs.. LINDA
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