Destiny

What is my destiny to be? 
What is the ultimate choice for me? 
Would i walk with all certainties? 
Or would i be lost for all eternity? 

Ohhh Hold my hand and show me the way, 
Cradle my heart and tell me it's gonna be okay, 
Guide me along, both night and day, 
Tell me, i gotta listen to what you say. 

Tell me, i'd meet victory right at the end, 
Tell me, my heart i could really mend, 
Tell me, there is always a helping hand, 
To guide me through and take my stand. 

Upon all fate and destiny, 
could this really be reality, 
or is this merely fantasy, 
of a soul filled with misery? 

This could really be a journey, 
on a path to fulfill a fated destiny, 
Ohh i'll tell what i really forsee, 
A wonderful end it shall be. 

So i'll let fate drive me through, 
and I'll let destiny choose it's course, 
Ohh dear heart i am trusting you, 
Guide me through the trembling wars. 

All i shall say is you got to believe, 
And you got to have the trust, 
remember God and you'll find relieve, 
and all your problems will turn to dust.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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September 14, 2026 at 10:33 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 4:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Siti,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Chuan Seng Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 9:34 AM
In questioning you infuse... thoughts of God and trust in you... great piece of poem... nice quiet read
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