Destiny

Do you ever stop and wonder was this just meant to be Things happen for a reason – do you agree with me? How many times has your phone rung and you know who is making the call It’s almost like telepathy - does this happen to us all? Some things just can’t be explained I put it down to fate But if you want to chase a dream grab it before it’s too late Jan Allison 17th June 2014

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Darren Watson

Date: 6/17/2014 10:44:00 PM

Lovely poem Jan A dream grabbed becomes a reality and a dream come true . I pray all your dreams end that way.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 7:46:00 AM

I'm still dreaming a of a tall grey haired man LOL Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2014 1:18:00 AM

Thanks as ever for the lovely comment Darren - nothing wrong with dreaming takes you away from the complexities of life albeit for a short time:-) Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/17/2014 3:33:00 PM

Great wisdom Jan...I might have to take that chance even though I know that chance is slim....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2014 3:39:00 PM

Hi Tim. I used to look after an old lady in her 90's she used to say to me 'three things never come back, the spoken word, the sped arrow, and the neglected opportunity' wise wise words indeed. Just grab every chance at happiness Tim life is all too short. Hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2014 3:29:00 PM

Nice poem on destiny, Jan. the last line however, puts things into perspective. In the end, it's up to US how our dreams turn out.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2014 3:38:00 PM

Yes I agree Andrea. I'm very much of the view 'while you see a chance take it' and if you don't take advantage of the here and now you will probably never get the opportunity again. It's so easy to look back and have regrets for the things you should have done when you had the chance :-) Hugs as ever Jan xxxx