Destiny

beautiful petal...

withering upon fate’s hour

retains its fragrance



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Leonora Galinta's Destiny Contest
by nette onclaud

beautytimehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2014 at 5:49 PM

Nicely done Nette,,,Linda

Andrea Dietrich

July 1, 2014 at 6:24 PM

wow, what a beauty. I had not yet seen it, and I am glad to see it won in the contest. Congrats and thanks so much for my stars placement. I really enjoyed that contest of yours.

Casarah Nance

July 1, 2014 at 5:46 PM

Oh this is stunning, grats on your win!

Doris Jamoner

July 1, 2014 at 11:44 AM

Congratz for the win! You deserve it! Wishing you all the Best always! - Doris

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 1, 2014 at 5:42 AM

Great Haiku Nette ! Adorable ,, congrats on top win !

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 1, 2014 at 1:39 AM

So true, nette, congrats on the great win,

Arlene Smith

June 30, 2014 at 4:15 PM

Congrats on a great win, Nette! Hugs.. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

June 30, 2014 at 4:05 PM

Hi Nette, I extend a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your TOP win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards. Pandita

Frederic Parker

June 30, 2014 at 2:56 PM

congratulation nette, loved the line withering on fate's hour

Roy Jerden

June 30, 2014 at 2:52 PM

Renders thoughts of lemon blossoms in Sicily, at least in my mind. Very good, Nette! Congratulations.

Len Gasun

June 30, 2014 at 10:36 AM

Congratulations my very dear friend, Netter for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Paul Callus

June 23, 2014 at 3:28 PM

This is destined to do very well, Nette; one of my favourites. Merits a 7 rating. // paul

Paul Callus

June 30, 2014 at 2:50 PM

....glad that I was right! Congratulations:)

Monterey Sirak

June 15, 2014 at 10:18 AM

Stunning!!!!!!!!!

David Mohn

June 10, 2014 at 10:00 PM

Wonderful Nette

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 9:19 AM

Wishing you luck...pd

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 8, 2014 at 1:41 PM

- Beautiful dear friend - Good luck in the contest! - Thank you for your faithful reader of my poems - (I have not had time to "soup" this past week. - Have a nice Sunday, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 8, 2014 at 5:06 AM

I liked the message about the fragrance, nette

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 8, 2014 at 3:00 AM

:) this one so soft... :D i like the 2nd line.. :)

Frederic Parker

June 7, 2014 at 8:05 PM

there are those who understand and there are those who comprehend, you are one who does both, your poetry allows me think without restraint when reading your work