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Destiny

tomorrow wonders why we assume it’s promised… no one knows the hour

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2014 9:40:00 AM

wow, GREAT thinking on this one, my friend. I liked it a LOT.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2014 5:06:00 AM

Creative write with a nice message,David, congrats on the win

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/30/2014 9:22:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, David.. Hugs.. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/30/2014 4:56:00 PM

Hi David, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your great win. Wonderful Haiku. Warmest regards. Pandita

Len Gasun

Date: 6/30/2014 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend david for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2014 7:28:00 AM

Very expressive haiku, David; one of my favs. gl in contest. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 6/30/2014 3:33:00 PM

Back for another read...and with deserved congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:39:00 AM

well done David...pd

L.James Tanner

Date: 6/7/2014 1:34:00 PM

Good write, very nice

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/6/2014 11:34:00 AM

Beautiful write - well done!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2014 4:35:00 AM

Brilliant haiku with such a powerful message. Hugs Jan x