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Destiny

tomorrow wonders
why we assume it’s promised…
no one knows the hour

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2014 at 9:40 AM

wow, GREAT thinking on this one, my friend. I liked it a LOT.

July 1, 2014 at 5:06 AM

Creative write with a nice message,David, congrats on the win

June 30, 2014 at 9:22 PM

Congrats on a great win, David.. Hugs.. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

June 30, 2014 at 4:56 PM

Hi David, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your great win. Wonderful Haiku. Warmest regards. Pandita

June 30, 2014 at 11:25 AM

Congratulations my dear friend david for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

June 13, 2014 at 7:28 AM

Very expressive haiku, David; one of my favs. gl in contest. // paul

June 30, 2014 at 3:33 PM

Back for another read...and with deserved congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 8:39 AM

well done David...pd

June 7, 2014 at 1:34 PM

Good write, very nice

Pandita Sietesantos

June 6, 2014 at 11:34 AM

Beautiful write - well done!

June 6, 2014 at 4:35 AM

Brilliant haiku with such a powerful message. Hugs Jan x

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