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Destiny

What is this which is called destiny
Is it the same as mutiny?
We rely too much on fate
Lest we lose ourselves
In the bogus world
Which binds us all
To something
Known as
Life!

Contest : Imagination
By : Nette Onclaud
Date : 7 June 2012

Copyright © Anoucheka Gangabissoon | Year Posted 2012

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Chipepo Lwele Date: 9/26/2012 7:27:00 AM wonderful .thanx for reading my stuff. Login to Reply

Richard Palmer Date: 6/12/2012 7:40:00 AM nice write,wish you luck Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 6/9/2012 9:32:00 AM Hmmm..maybe mutiny in the sense that we need courage and perseverance, Anoucheka? "Life" never came with a book of instructions with tips on problem solving. What might feel like a "bogus world" today, might feel brighter and warmer on the morrow.:) So wishing you the best! Mikki Login to Reply Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date: 6/9/2012 9:34:00 AM Well yeah by Mutiny i meant all our problems and the bogus world refers to spirituality.....hmm in the Hinduism philosophies this world is illusory the real world is there where the Lord is!! :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/9/2012 9:21:00 AM Great thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your imagination is sure to be top of the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date: 6/9/2012 9:22:00 AM Thk you Sara :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/6/2012 4:45:00 PM A G., this is one fine nonet. i love the conspiracy behind life..xox...pd Login to Reply Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date: 6/6/2012 9:43:00 PM Hey PD....Thks.........how u been??

Funom Makama Date: 6/6/2012 5:06:00 AM This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work. Login to Reply Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date: 6/6/2012 5:15:00 AM Thk you so much! Writing is a passion! Plz do read more! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/6/2012 2:11:00 AM Well written, like it. - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply Anoucheka Gangabissoon Date: 6/6/2012 5:15:00 AM Thk you Anne-Lise :)