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Destiny

What is this which is called destiny
Is it the same as mutiny?
We rely too much on fate
Lest we lose ourselves
In the bogus world
Which binds us all
To something
Known as
Life!

Contest : Imagination
By : Nette Onclaud
Date : 7 June 2012

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Chipepo Lwele

September 26, 2012 at 7:27 AM

wonderful .thanx for reading my stuff.

Richard Palmer

June 12, 2012 at 7:40 AM

nice write,wish you luck

Michelle Mac Donald

June 9, 2012 at 9:32 AM

Hmmm..maybe mutiny in the sense that we need courage and perseverance, Anoucheka? "Life" never came with a book of instructions with tips on problem solving. What might feel like a "bogus world" today, might feel brighter and warmer on the morrow.:) So wishing you the best! Mikki

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

June 9, 2012 at 9:34 AM

Well yeah by Mutiny i meant all our problems and the bogus world refers to spirituality.....hmm in the Hinduism philosophies this world is illusory the real world is there where the Lord is!! :)

Sara Kendrick

June 9, 2012 at 9:21 AM

Great thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your imagination is sure to be top of the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

June 9, 2012 at 9:22 AM

Thk you Sara :)

Poet Destroyer A

June 6, 2012 at 4:45 PM

A G., this is one fine nonet. i love the conspiracy behind life..xox...pd

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

June 6, 2012 at 9:43 PM

Hey PD....Thks.........how u been??

Funom Makama

June 6, 2012 at 5:06 AM

This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

June 6, 2012 at 5:15 AM

Thk you so much! Writing is a passion! Plz do read more! :)