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Destined For Spring

Bradford pears decorated in white Forsythia in her golden gown Star Magnolia flowers droop out of sight As many daffodils' petals have fallen down Pouring rain did damage to tender flowers Some fell to the ground or turned brown Those left add delight to my eyes and give powers To heal winter's blahs and breakdown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dutta Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Very nicely composed. I enjoyed. Love.
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Your visit to my page is uplifting. Thank you, Anisha, for dropping by. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 1:12 PM
cute one, Sara. I really liked the ending line!
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 2:00 PM
Why, thank you, Andrea. Spring brings out the desire to write about spring blossoms. Sara K
Roper Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 3:25 PM
Beautiful, love the imagery and feel of your spring poem.
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 3:31 AM
Thank you, Eve. Your visit is encouraging. Sara K
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 12:25 PM
You have truly described the splendor of spring even when spring rains crush some of the floral beauty! If this is for a contest, best wishes. Blessings and prayers!
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 3:31 AM
Sometimes in spring, a gentle rain seems to clear the air, but for some reason, it isn't happening or to me it isn't happening like that this year. I guess it comes just a little later. Thanks for the visit, Sam. Sara K
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March 4, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Your poem beautifully captures the unwavering strength of nature, even amidst the hardships of pouring rain and scattered petals. It exemplifies the indomitable spirit to triumph over adversity. Sara, your words truly resonate with thoughtfulness and depth.
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 3:29 AM
Lasaad, Thank you for uplifting review of my work. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Dear Sara, I loved the imagery of Bradford pears, Forsythia, and Star Magnolia flowers which evokes a sense of renewal and hope. Despite the challenges of pouring rain and fallen petals, the resilience of nature shines through your poem. It's the power to overcome adversity. Sara, you artistically capture spring's beauty and healing essence in your poetic words. - Blessings, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Why, thank you, Daniel. I need all the blessings I can get and I appreciate the kind review. Sara K
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