Sara Kendrick | + Follow Poet |
Rhyme | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

Destined For Spring

Bradford pears decorated in white
Forsythia in her golden gown
Star Magnolia flowers droop out of sight
As many daffodils' petals have fallen down

Pouring rain did damage to tender flowers
Some fell to the ground or turned brown
Those left add delight to my eyes and give powers
To heal winter's blahs and breakdown     

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2024

Please Login to post a comment

Anisha Dutta Date: 3/8/2024 6:31:00 AM Very nicely composed. I enjoyed. Love. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/8/2024 7:07:00 AM Your visit to my page is uplifting. Thank you, Anisha, for dropping by. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/5/2024 1:12:00 PM cute one, Sara. I really liked the ending line! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/5/2024 2:00:00 PM Why, thank you, Andrea. Spring brings out the desire to write about spring blossoms. Sara K

Eve Roper Date: 3/4/2024 3:25:00 PM Beautiful, love the imagery and feel of your spring poem. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/5/2024 3:31:00 AM Thank you, Eve. Your visit is encouraging. Sara K

Sam Kauffman Date: 3/4/2024 12:25:00 PM You have truly described the splendor of spring even when spring rains crush some of the floral beauty! If this is for a contest, best wishes. Blessings and prayers! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/5/2024 3:31:00 AM Sometimes in spring, a gentle rain seems to clear the air, but for some reason, it isn't happening or to me it isn't happening like that this year. I guess it comes just a little later. Thanks for the visit, Sam. Sara K

Sotto Poet Date: 3/4/2024 11:49:00 AM Your poem beautifully captures the unwavering strength of nature, even amidst the hardships of pouring rain and scattered petals. It exemplifies the indomitable spirit to triumph over adversity. Sara, your words truly resonate with thoughtfulness and depth. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/5/2024 3:29:00 AM Lasaad, Thank you for uplifting review of my work. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 3/4/2024 8:22:00 AM Dear Sara, I loved the imagery of Bradford pears, Forsythia, and Star Magnolia flowers which evokes a sense of renewal and hope. Despite the challenges of pouring rain and fallen petals, the resilience of nature shines through your poem. It's the power to overcome adversity. Sara, you artistically capture spring's beauty and healing essence in your poetic words. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/4/2024 9:38:00 AM Why, thank you, Daniel. I need all the blessings I can get and I appreciate the kind review. Sara K