Desputing Fairness

It's your first poem,
and you expect to win a contest?
Do you have talent and have
written your best?
I have worked hard 
at scribbling every line,
and accepted with honor
the awards given to me in fairness.
Don't accuse anyone
of being unfair and guilt of favoritism;
many good folks are getting hurt...
read their work and realize
that they have deserved their wins!
Envy comes out of an angry heart,
so full of evil that it cannot reason;
and if a poet doesn't appreciate
and discern what good poetry is...
who would pick up the torch,
be admired by his voracious readers, 
and be acclaimed as one of the greatest?


Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 31, 2009 at 10:46 PM
Andrew, this is a great way of putting into words what we here at the Soup feel! Thanks for putting it out there! Hugs, Donna
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October 31, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Interesting write. Keep writing. Sara
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October 31, 2009 at 7:16 AM
and it's a very good concret poem! As is everything you write. I didn't read the poem which is hurting folks..thank goodness. And your talk above is a good one! Light & Love
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