.......Despise

Being with you made me hate love ,for i was the happiest with you .
With you i knew no pain like grape vines together we grew .
your eyes like the sky itself,which set my heart ablaze .
Truly this was love in it's prime my wonder years, the golden age .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/24/2009 1:47:00 PM
Oooohhhh...nice line! Being with you made me hate love, for I was happiest with you! Sheeshenheimer Mr. C....you are a romanticist and a poet from far beyond this era, perhaps as well, in a past life...? You are a man of the heart and soul~ Wise~ Who ever she was, she was not the one for you....that is fair to say without knowing you or anything about your history~ I think there is more you need to experience before you tie yourself down to one woman, and that is from my gut!~ Janers :)
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:30:00 AM
Truthful. And it seems like you loose interest as the years go along. Enjoyed reading it and have a blessed day.
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Date: 3/24/2009 6:24:00 AM
Great rhyme with this one. Thank you for your comments on my writing. I look forward to reading more from you. Smiles from Lolita
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