Desperation

Desperately clinging to the side of the mountain Trying to hold on Just one wrong move In that moment it’s all gone!

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Sotto Poet

Date: 8/12/2023 7:48:00 AM

Deb, your composition exhibits a delightful brevity that resonates with a myriad of circumstances. In the mere flutter of an eyelid, a multitude of events can transpire.

Deb M
Date: 8/14/2023 6:48:00 PM

Absolutely Lasaad….thankyou…Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 8/10/2023 7:58:00 PM

In the blink of an eye. Goodbye

Deb M
Date: 8/14/2023 6:47:00 PM

So true lovely Miss Shirley! Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/10/2023 7:11:00 PM

Wow! My daughter and son-in-law had a recent freak accident. They were driving on a path on the farm and the road suddenly gave way. Thankfully they are ok!! Blessings, dear one!

Deb M
Date: 8/14/2023 6:49:00 PM

On my goodness Kim….how lucky for them that would have been scary! Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/10/2023 7:07:00 PM

Yikes!

Deb M
Date: 8/14/2023 6:47:00 PM

Yikes right back at ya BB…hehe! Debx

The Situation

Date: 8/9/2023 7:26:00 PM

This fits many a situation.

Deb M
Date: 8/14/2023 6:47:00 PM

Indeed TS…Thanks….Debx