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Desperately Yours

those dark eyes like rolling thunder clouds will they shower love or pelt me hail? silhouette of feminine love curves give my heart a roller coaster ride! her lips say but I hear angels sing with the harp, the flute and everything! Is she real or had I too much rum? she holds the key to my heart’s kingdom! written 21/02/2021 2nd placement Images in parallel poetry contest Joseph May sponsored 4 stanzas with 3 lines 3,6 9 syllables

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Date: 3/19/2021 10:14:00 AM
‘too much rum!’ ~ brings a smile ~ congrats on your win, Krish
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/19/2021 11:30:00 PM
Thanks Seeker! wine women and wealth - three W of good living!
Date: 3/15/2021 5:39:00 AM
Very nicely done Krish, Congrats on your win
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/15/2021 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Joseph! Pleased you like it.:)
Date: 2/21/2021 10:50:00 PM
You did this very well. Romantic write, comparison with nature, not for me. Can never do. But I want to try. Take care Rama
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/21/2021 11:22:00 PM
Thanks Rama! Do try I-am sure you will do well!
Date: 2/21/2021 7:35:00 PM
Krish, I'd say that you are a real connoiseur of women. This is a marvelous write, and a superb entry for the contest. Light and Joy, Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/21/2021 11:21:00 PM
Thanks Gershon for your compliment! Let’s hope Joseph May likes it!

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