Krish Radhakrishna Poet Verse

Desperately Yours

those dark eyes
like rolling thunder clouds
will they shower love or pelt me hail?

silhouette 
of feminine love curves
give my heart a roller coaster ride!

her lips say
but I hear angels sing
with the harp, the flute and everything!

Is she real
or had I too much rum?
she holds the key to my heart’s kingdom!

written 21/02/2021
2nd placement
Images in parallel poetry contest
Joseph May sponsored
4 stanzas with 3 lines 3,6 9 syllables

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Unseeking Seeker March 19, 2021 at 10:14 AM ‘too much rum!’ ~ brings a smile ~ congrats on your win, Krish Krish Radhakrishna March 19, 2021 at 11:30 PM Thanks Seeker! wine women and wealth - three W of good living!

Joseph May March 15, 2021 at 5:39 AM Very nicely done Krish, Congrats on your win Krish Radhakrishna March 15, 2021 at 9:27 AM Thanks Joseph! Pleased you like it.:)

Rama Balasubramanian February 21, 2021 at 10:50 PM You did this very well. Romantic write, comparison with nature, not for me. Can never do. But I want to try. Take care Rama Krish Radhakrishna February 21, 2021 at 11:22 PM Thanks Rama! Do try I-am sure you will do well!

Gershon Wolf February 21, 2021 at 7:35 PM Krish, I'd say that you are a real connoiseur of women. This is a marvelous write, and a superb entry for the contest. Light and Joy, Gershon Krish Radhakrishna February 21, 2021 at 11:21 PM Thanks Gershon for your compliment! Let’s hope Joseph May likes it!