Desperate Housewife

Dressed in an old tee and sweatpants
hair unkempt in a careless ponytail
changes nothing but multiple hats
honestly, too many for a day.

Cook, cleaner, driver, gardener, and teacher
switches avatars in the blink of an eye
nurse, physician and also cheerleader
all tedious jobs without a pay

Fiercely ambitious she was once
supporting the kids and her man now
accused of being a parasitic dunce
by pointy fingers who know not her skin

Smelling all over of onions and Windex
as she finally creeps into bed
desperate she is-but not for sex
just a loving hug,a lingering caress.

Desperately wants her man to hear her heart knock
to not dismiss it as the ticking of kitchen clock.


Written on 06/08/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/10/2016 9:09:00 AM
Nicely written sharing the story of despair - good luck in the contest - Jesse
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/10/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thanks a lot for reading,Jesse!
Date: 6/9/2016 6:41:00 PM
this is fantastic. I think PD should like it a lot for her contest.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/10/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 6/8/2016 8:00:00 PM
Love this poem because its a tribute to women everywhere who multi-task everyday!:)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/9/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thanks for reading Cheryl!
Date: 6/8/2016 3:36:00 PM
Wow, you wrote such a powerful poem, Sara. How true this is for so many. It should do well in the contest! All the best! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/8/2016 3:42:00 PM
thanks Sandra!
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