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Despair a Found Phrasis

in winter...continuity ....on a blank wall locations,interiors indelibly drawn on memory dirt grime,decomposition mirrors of neglect nothing ..no one rules anarchy avails reputations burn.. with no place to go

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Date: 9/12/2017 11:07:00 PM
I like this piece a lot. Not just the sentiment or phrasing, but the punctuation and pauses. I think you effectively set the readers' pace. It worked. I'm a huge advocate for punctuation in poetry.
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/12/2017 11:55:00 PM
Thanks Thvia

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