Brian Strand Poet Couplet

Despair a Found Phrasis

in winter...continuity
....on a blank wall

locations,interiors
indelibly drawn on memory

dirt grime,decomposition
mirrors of neglect

nothing ..no one rules
anarchy avails

reputations burn..
with no place to go

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Thvia Shetley September 12, 2017 at 11:07 PM I like this piece a lot. Not just the sentiment or phrasing, but the punctuation and pauses. I think you effectively set the readers' pace. It worked. I'm a huge advocate for punctuation in poetry. Brian Strand September 12, 2017 at 11:55 PM Thanks Thvia