Despair

Mid-Summer- hot, no cooling breeze
Bodies wilt like tired leaves
Dogs lie panting in shade caves

Man walks slowly, head down
Heading down dusty road out of town
Face carved by time into a frown

Thinking ‘bout times past
Wife left, she couldn’t last
Children followed, moved out fast

It was the whisky chased them away
Cussing and yelling fighting every day
Hit her one late night in early May

Morning came, breakfast served like nothing transpired
Went to work in them fields overly tired
Got home late, shack deserted

Note on the table with a loaf of bread
Don’t follow us wish you dead
Realization hit like a ton of lead

Reached for that flask kept on his hip
Put it to his lips to take a sip
Heard that voice no more, don’t slip

Into that fog again which brought you down
Now causing you to leave town
With you head down

Set fire to that shack
Flames heat your back
Nobody cuts you any slack

What if...you thought as you sat by a stream
Watching your life slip like a dream
Punctuated by a loud retort, no scream

You slipped into darkness away from the light
Into that final good night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Rios Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Love the Imagery
Konos Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 9:58 PM
A creative mind....could be the beginning of a novel as I eagerly await Despair Part 2, thanks once more A Big 7 should be a 10 but the numbers ran out....
Cee Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 11:51 PM
I likes. I have a poem titled "Despair" as well. I like yours better.
Ranahan Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 9:31 PM
I read your poem tonight. I pictured the life of despair. Real despair confronted. Nothing left to eliminate. Got it. Jim
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