Desolation

How the sun hath dimmed
Where the fairest flowers sprang
Won't thou come hither
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 3, 2016 at 9:49 PM
thank you for the reply
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February 3, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Hi Jasmine, a gloomy yet awesome haiku. LINDA
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February 3, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Thank you Linda!
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February 1, 2016 at 2:56 PM
i love this haiku so much. SKAT
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February 1, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Thank you!
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