Carol Mitra Poet Rhyme

Desolation

City life had stripped me bare
Feeling lost and lonely with no care
The wall of discontent blocked my path
Why did I not see it coming from the start?

From- Hope in the Woods
18.10.2020
‘Rithimus  Divisa 10’ Contest

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Arturo Michael October 18, 2020 at 7:14 AM You probably did see it coming...I like the way you expressed yourself... Carol Mitra October 18, 2020 at 7:58 AM My ability to not fathom out the pain of urban life....that sucked my emotions dry, from the start.....Thanks Arturo.